Here is the rough cut of our film...
This rough cut we arranged an audience viewing for it see what people liked so far and find out any ideas they had for how we could improve it.
Things our Audience Liked
- Thought it was very stylised
- Really liked how it was edited, with us removing the colour apart from the red
- Commented on specific shots they thought were clever and the angles we used, such as the low down shot of the footsteps
Things to Improve on
- Sort out the diegetic song throughout
- Either remove the footstep noises or put them for all footsteps
- Maybe re film a shot or two of the friend for the beginning to make the audience be able to relate to her more and slowdown the pace
- Add a fade from black at the start of the film, again make the beginning less sudden
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