What they liked
- They commented on the fast editing of the diary between the close ups of words and the mid shot of the whole open book
- They also liked the colour grade of the whole trailer
- They thought is was very easy to understand what was going on
Points to Improve
- Change the edit in scene two to slow down the pace of it so it does not feel as rushed and confusing
- Add in the music which will hopefully lift it all
- A lot of work needs to be done to the diegetic sounds, which we will fix by adding in the sound from from the Digital Audio Recorder.
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